Talk:Nia Hovall/@comment-34656539-20180211234636

                 Did they really jump from captain to admiral? Going right past rear admiral (lower half), rear admiral (upper half), and vice admiral to be at admiral proper? That’s a serious promotion, unless the navy they served in has a different ranking system than the US Navy, and if so, I believe that will need explained at some point. Further when a rank like "admiral" is on its own I believe it's not supposed to be capitalized.

                 A small nitpick, but do you really want to just call it the “Academy”? I’ve never heard of a school or university that called itself just that. These things have a tendency for names that are just words thrown together, usages of north/south/east/west/central/outer, and embellishments. At the very least it might be better as the “Royal Academy”, though even that would probably just be shorthand for the “Royal Academy of [Insert Empire]”.